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Jiling Lin, LAc's avatar

Gorgeous as always. The river imagery. Moon. Mountains. Teens in a sacred place. Cellphones under the table. All the details! And "What’s mostly left of the family gathers, joyously."

Your sentences project has inspired my own! I started near the end of June, and am almost one week in. Opening to the mystery of the adventure. So satisfying. Thank you for inspiring.

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I have enjoyed your tenure as poet laureate. I was worried it would soften your political edge(s), but you have remained true and sincere, and thanks for that. Also, as a teacher myself, this--"The old saw some teachers use about “learning from their students” is proved true in a library full of sullen and unrepentant representatives of such slouching through a presentation just to acquire their renewal credits"--made me laugh. Truth, again.

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